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[Dr Memory]

I would like to present for your reading pleasure updates to episode 9 and episode 10.

As always, thank you for your help and support.

[Dr Memory]

I'm trying to get back on a schedule with posting here.  If all works well I'll have the next release ready by Sunday.

After reading through episode 10, I found a few things that I missed in terms of story line, so there are more than just grammer and spelling corrections in this version.

Thank you all for your help with this endevor.

[Dr Memory]

So much for getting back on schedule.  It's terrible when the rest of life won't stop so that you can get the things you want to get accomplished done.

Anyway... here are some minor revision to episode 11.   And I present for your reading enjoyment episode 12.  Please let me know what you think and tell be if you spot ang language or spelling errors.

Thank you very much.

[DrizzlingEnthalpy]

Talking about you getting back on schedule... I'm catching up on reading. I'm going to bed now, so I'm planning to read the last couple of chapters tomorrow.

Oh, here's a quick spelling correction: "ang" should be "any" XD

[DrizzlingEnthalpy]

I've been busy and am now almost finished catching up on reading. I am now on episode ten and hope to finish the rest by the end of today; by tomorrow at latest. Things have gotten pretty interesting with the introduction of the new cyborgs (I have to wonder if Freddy Kreuger was a bit of an inspiration for the nightmare aspect), but MAN are there a lot of characters to keep track of now! XD I've noticed a few errors, but.. I... didn't write them down.

[Dr Memory]

I'm back.  I had hoped that I would get the chance to relax a bit during the Thanksgiving holiday, but it felt like I need a vacation from the four day weekend.  Between that and another major windstorm that took down more branches and power lines, any hope of getting a bit ahead on my writing vanished.

A number of people have commented about the large cast of characters.  Most of them are Suguru's classmates.  Some are just insidental, but I gave them a name anyway.  I've included a compressed copy of my cast list (i didn't include the personallity sketches I have on all of the characters that are more than insidental).

Thank you so much for your support and comments.  There are a few minor edits for Episode 12 and I present for your consideration Episode 13.

Thank you again

[Dr Memory]

For you reading pleasure (I hope), I present revisions to Episode 13 (with some minor story line changes) and the new Episode 14.

For those of you who have not done so yet, check out DrizzlingEnthalpy's web site.  It is very well put together and the guest book would be a good place for you to sound off about your feelings about the Mahoromatic series (especially the ending).  The link to the site is available through the MahoromaticRevival.com forum topic.  Give it a look.

Thank you again for your support.

[Dr Memory]

I present for your reading pleasure and for your comments episode 15 and the revisions for episode 14.

[Dr Memory]

I hope everyone had a joyous holiday season and I wish everyone a Happy New Year.

An unexpected trip out of town has put me a bit behind schedule.

I wish to present for your reading pleasure Episode 16 of Mahoromatic -- Seasons of Change.  I also have revisions for Episode 15.

Thank you all for your continued support.

[Dr Memory]

Greetings all.

This weekend has given me a bit of a chance to get caught up so I am publishing updates for episode 16 (just a few spelling error corrected) and new episode 17 and 18.  If things work out, I may be able to get another one or two published this week (if I don't get sent out of town last minute again).

Thank you for your continuing support.  I hope you enjoy.

[Dr Memory]

When you think you are finally ahead of the game they go and change the rules on you.

I finally though I might be able to get on a regular schedule with my stories, but my computer ended up dying.  The operating system disk decided that it no long wished to speak Windows and started pouting.  Luckily I keep my stories on a separate disk (with backups on a separate computer) so nothing was lost, but it took six evenings before I could edit on my machine (Reloading the operating system took almost ten hours and that's with high speed download of the updates).

So now that I've got everything in place I'll post three new episodes for people to review and comment on.  Thank you as always for your support.

[Dr Memory]

Greetings all,

I am posting a new version of episode 21 with some major rewrites.  Someone pointed out to me that I missed a major plot item.  I'll let you figure out what it is.  I am also posting episode 22 for your reading pleasure.

Thank you all for your support.