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Rogue Noir

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An Eva Fanfic That's Just... Wrong.. (Warning: Lime)
« le: 09 octobre 2003 à 20:16:41 »

This is my very first fanfic..  I'm also in the process of making an Evangelion/.hack crossover..

http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=1546504
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[DarkScribe] Syndikos

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« Réponse #1 le: 10 octobre 2003 à 01:03:10 »

OMG man... :?  that's was rather short. i thought the darkness and angst would show up in the first few paragraphs but i didn't find any until the end though. the ending was heavily angsty for such small detail.

you should post this on the DS forum and see the "reactions"...i believe that would be quite the experience :lol:

OOCness through the roof...asuka took her 'rape?' rather well...misato took shinji's death rather well too :? ...and then shinji and asuka(implied) dies...holy crap that's one heckofastory. :camper: kill it quick!

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« Réponse #2 le: 10 octobre 2003 à 01:32:03 »

Heh, thanks for the feedback..  btw, what's the DS forum?
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« Réponse #3 le: 10 octobre 2003 à 05:11:20 »

heh, sounds good to me.
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« Réponse #4 le: 10 octobre 2003 à 05:34:31 »

Citation de: Rogue Noir
Heh, thanks for the feedback..  btw, what's the DS forum?

http://www.darkscribes.org/forum
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« Réponse #5 le: 10 octobre 2003 à 15:24:53 »

Citation de: Rogue Noir
Heh, thanks for the feedback..  btw, what's the DS forum?


again i was beaten to the punch by DC... :evil:

http://www.darkscribes.org/forum

darkscribes is the home of the so called/believed/somewhat proven "elitists" of Eva fanfiction. although this is greatly debatable :?

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« Réponse #6 le: 10 octobre 2003 à 19:17:18 »

Citation de: [DarkScribe] Syndikos
Citation de: Rogue Noir
Heh, thanks for the feedback..  btw, what's the DS forum?


again i was beaten to the punch by DC... :evil:

http://www.darkscribes.org/forum

darkscribes is the home of the so called/believed/somewhat proven "elitists" of Eva fanfiction. although this is greatly debatable :?

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BLASPHEMY!  IT IS PROVEN!  :evil:
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Re: An Eva Fanfic That's Just... Wrong.. (Warning: Lime)
« Réponse #7 le: 11 octobre 2003 à 05:50:40 »

Citation de: Rogue Noir
This is my very first fanfic..  I'm also in the process of making an Evangelion/.hack crossover..

http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=1546504


nicely done for a darkfic.

*looks at two bickering DSer's* there's a reason it's called a -darkfic- :roll:

i look forward to your crossover. post and let us know when it's started, or simply seek prereaders here or post the beta version for us to comment on.

~L.Reika
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Re: An Eva Fanfic That's Just... Wrong.. (Warning: Lime)
« Réponse #8 le: 11 octobre 2003 à 06:51:55 »

Citation de: [DarkLady] Reika
Citation de: Rogue Noir
This is my very first fanfic..  I'm also in the process of making an Evangelion/.hack crossover..

http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=1546504


nicely done for a darkfic.

*looks at two bickering DSer's* there's a reason it's called a -darkfic- :roll:

i look forward to your crossover. post and let us know when it's started, or simply seek prereaders here or post the beta version for us to comment on.

~L.Reika


What does that fic being dark have anything to do with me correcting Syndikos? :?
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Re: An Eva Fanfic That's Just... Wrong.. (Warning: Lime)
« Réponse #9 le: 11 octobre 2003 à 07:05:05 »

Citation de: Divine Chaos
Citation de: [DarkLady] Reika
Citation de: Rogue Noir
This is my very first fanfic..  I'm also in the process of making an Evangelion/.hack crossover..

http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=1546504


nicely done for a darkfic.

*looks at two bickering DSer's* there's a reason it's called a -darkfic- :roll:

i look forward to your crossover. post and let us know when it's started, or simply seek prereaders here or post the beta version for us to comment on.

~L.Reika


What does that fic being dark have anything to do with me correcting Syndikos? :?


you're defeating the purpose of the post...
review first
bicker later
but i guess you're just answering a question too :?

~L.Reika
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Re: An Eva Fanfic That's Just... Wrong.. (Warning: Lime)
« Réponse #10 le: 13 octobre 2003 à 06:04:48 »

Citation de: Divine Chaos
Citation de: [DarkLady] Reika
Citation de: Rogue Noir
This is my very first fanfic..  I'm also in the process of making an Evangelion/.hack crossover..

http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=1546504


nicely done for a darkfic.

*looks at two bickering DSer's* there's a reason it's called a -darkfic- :roll:

i look forward to your crossover. post and let us know when it's started, or simply seek prereaders here or post the beta version for us to comment on.

~L.Reika


What does that fic being dark have anything to do with me correcting Syndikos? :?


Thanks...

Here's a very early draft of the .hack + Evangelion crossover.. some parts I haven't even proofread..  it's also likely that I'll switch it to prose format.
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Re: An Eva Fanfic That's Just... Wrong.. (Warning: Lime)
« Réponse #11 le: 14 octobre 2003 à 03:38:01 »

Citation de: Rogue Noir
Citation de: Divine Chaos
Citation de: [DarkLady] Reika
Citation de: Rogue Noir
This is my very first fanfic..  I'm also in the process of making an Evangelion/.hack crossover..

http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=1546504


nicely done for a darkfic.

*looks at two bickering DSer's* there's a reason it's called a -darkfic- :roll:

i look forward to your crossover. post and let us know when it's started, or simply seek prereaders here or post the beta version for us to comment on.

~L.Reika


What does that fic being dark have anything to do with me correcting Syndikos? :?


Thanks...

Here's a very early draft of the .hack + Evangelion crossover.. some parts I haven't even proofread..  it's also likely that I'll switch it to prose format.


You probably know this already but i'm going to say it anyway. Lots of people will, infact, refuse to read a fic if it is in script format.
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« Réponse #12 le: 15 octobre 2003 à 18:48:09 »

yes.

script is...nevermind.

good story so far, update soon.

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